Okay, here it is. The beginning of the beginning. I have pages in various stages of completion, but I thought I'd finish page one and share it with you. Let me know what you think, but please be gentle, it's my first time.
Lines and overall art are beautiful, Kenny. Why's the cotton so high on the foreground figure, though, when the background figures are so tall in it?
They almost look like they're floating. Course, it COULD be my eyes...can ya make this any bigger? Or at least make it where we can click on it and see it in another window?
Alright guys, I agree. Fortunately, an easy fix. This first page is the one that has been giving me the most trouble. So I'll fix the cotton and I'm going to put some long sunsetty shadows under the figures.
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Lines and overall art are beautiful, Kenny.
Why's the cotton so high on the foreground figure, though, when the background figures are so tall in it?
They almost look like they're floating. Course, it COULD be my eyes...can ya make this any bigger? Or at least make it where we can click on it and see it in another window?
Beautiful stuff, dude. Can't wait to see more!
Alright guys, I agree. Fortunately, an easy fix. This first page is the one that has been giving me the most trouble. So I'll fix the cotton and I'm going to put some long sunsetty shadows under the figures.
Trump, what do you mean by text images?
Oh great. Go and make me feel insignificant about my book.....you talented sob.
Dang... looking freakin excellent bro! Hubba hubba hubba, hold me a copy when its done, I have my greenbacks at the ready dude!
Kenny, you've been holding out on me.
Thomas
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